You have potential for sure, i mean in all honesty this is a bit of a hodgepodge but had you thrown down a heavy bass and carried the beat you could have made either one long awesome song out of this or 3 good ones.
You have potential for sure, i mean in all honesty this is a bit of a hodgepodge but had you thrown down a heavy bass and carried the beat you could have made either one long awesome song out of this or 3 good ones.
good stuff you got here, The piano got a bit scratchy when it reached the higher octaves but other than that it was a really impressive piece especially for an improv.
man, even if it were a medley it seem you really didn't think that last part out and just kinda threw stuff together. middle section was strong and a decent intro.
why yes, why don't you make a medley for me then my good sir, you did? oh good I hope they like it :)
spacing could be a little better on a few parts
I like the piano work in it, it definitely lays down a good foundation. i found the random bass pad to be a bit distracting. what you're missing is a lead synth. If you redid the song with a longer base line (meaning bring it in sooner) and added the lead synth this could be something. Also it could be longer (personal preference) and you could work on closing it out. As i said earlier though it does have a lot of potential.
Good Damn
well the bass drowns out the guitar at points, i dont know if that was your intent but kinda backwards. 0:53-1:00 was amazing but you ended it too quick and had a hard transition out. also 1:10 was another great section and you pulled that one all the way through. seems like you got lazy at points but overall its sweet. If you want a new name call it "Bringing down the Titan"
Kinda reminds me...
Of old school donkey kong. Not bad sir :D
Well, thanks :D
Well...
1. Shorten down
2. Make it a loop
3. ????
4. Profit?
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