man, even if it were a medley it seem you really didn't think that last part out and just kinda threw stuff together. middle section was strong and a decent intro.
man, even if it were a medley it seem you really didn't think that last part out and just kinda threw stuff together. middle section was strong and a decent intro.
why yes, why don't you make a medley for me then my good sir, you did? oh good I hope they like it :)
Kinda reminds me...
Of old school donkey kong. Not bad sir :D
Well, thanks :D
Kinda simple...
But not necessarily bad, it sounded like rap to me but it was a bit long, shoulda just stuck with the main riff and made it a loop. Mighta gotten better reviews i think.
Def not bad startin out though.
Thanks
Needs a bit of work
One thing that got me was the saw(i'm assuming that was the foreground instrument) how you used it. It sounded like the timing was off a bit and some of the notes didn't sound like they fit in the key you happened to be using. Drumbeat needs a bit of work especially in your transitions.
However when you introduced the piano and finished the song out i was glad I really listened to the whole thing.
Lastly the baseline all but disappears in the section before the piano is introduced around 2:28 anyway fix all that up and i think you'll have something here.
I agree wholeheartedly on the drum parts...but i find no problems with the foreground instrument, the timing suits the song and the melody to me sounds pretty good, the only small flaw with it was maybe the buildups.
Nice Build up
I really like how you set up the drum scheme in this even if you used a preset. Another thing i liked was that you used speedy drums with a slow tune.
thanks man, i know its just a preset but yeah i did work around alot finding what fit where.
My cousin referred to this as celtic drum n bass haha
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