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ninjex15009

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You have potential for sure, i mean in all honesty this is a bit of a hodgepodge but had you thrown down a heavy bass and carried the beat you could have made either one long awesome song out of this or 3 good ones.

good stuff you got here, The piano got a bit scratchy when it reached the higher octaves but other than that it was a really impressive piece especially for an improv.

man, even if it were a medley it seem you really didn't think that last part out and just kinda threw stuff together. middle section was strong and a decent intro.

w0lv3rine responds:

why yes, why don't you make a medley for me then my good sir, you did? oh good I hope they like it :)

spacing could be a little better on a few parts

I like the piano work in it, it definitely lays down a good foundation. i found the random bass pad to be a bit distracting. what you're missing is a lead synth. If you redid the song with a longer base line (meaning bring it in sooner) and added the lead synth this could be something. Also it could be longer (personal preference) and you could work on closing it out. As i said earlier though it does have a lot of potential.

Good Damn

well the bass drowns out the guitar at points, i dont know if that was your intent but kinda backwards. 0:53-1:00 was amazing but you ended it too quick and had a hard transition out. also 1:10 was another great section and you pulled that one all the way through. seems like you got lazy at points but overall its sweet. If you want a new name call it "Bringing down the Titan"

I like it

Not bad, this has been my favorite song for around 20 years but i like the different feel you give to it. Honestly the only thing i can find wrong with tit is the repetitive piano/ guitar you have at the end of where each verse would go (i.e. 1:41), the notes are correct but i think if you lessened the number it would be a good bit better
8/10
4/5

I'm going to assume...

that you're new to FL studio and music theory.
This was pretty basic but thats not bad, i've heard worse.
Anyway the basic slayer plugin isnt gonna be popular, especially when you throw it in the heavy metal genre ( i got lucky once) but anyway as far as advice goes try and make your songs a bit more dynamic. Add more instruments and harmonize and see what comes of it. Listen to a few of the more popular songs on here to get an idea. Good luck.

Kinda reminds me...

Of old school donkey kong. Not bad sir :D

Inacio responds:

Well, thanks :D

Well...

1. Shorten down
2. Make it a loop
3. ????
4. Profit?

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